
The legend of La Diablesse
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Clive Gilson
Tales From The Caribbean
Clive Gilson / Solitude
2025
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The legend of La Diablesse: seduction, vanity, deceit, temptation, and supernatural punishment.
© Clive Gilson, 2026. Licensed under CC BY 4.0 (attribution required)
This is my own version of the tale based on local sources and online research.
The legend of La Diablesse
The night in the village was thick with heat and the scent of damp earth, but Jean did not feel it. His mind was lost to the haze of rum and the lingering thrill of the evening’s revelry. The sound of laughter still echoed in his ears as he stumbled along the narrow path home, his feet unsteady, his senses dulled.
Then, he saw her.
She stood beneath the crooked old tamarind tree, bathed in the pale glow of the moon. Her dress, flowing and white as bone, clung to her slender frame, and a wide-brimmed hat tilted over her face, hiding all but the barest glimpse of her lips—red, like a wound. A soft, floral scent drifted toward him, something sweet and wild, like orchids left to rot.
Jean stopped in his tracks, his breath catching in his throat. She was stunning—more beautiful than any woman he had ever seen. His pulse quickened. Who was she? Why was she here, alone in the night?
"You’re lost, aren’t you?" Her voice was velvet, a whisper against the hush of the trees.
Jean swallowed hard, suddenly aware of the thick silence pressing in around him. The village was behind him, far behind. He hadn’t realized how deep he had wandered into the forest’s edge.
The woman stepped forward, her movements fluid, hypnotic. "Come," she murmured, stretching out a delicate hand. "I’ll take you where you need to go."
Something in the pit of his stomach twisted, but his body moved without his mind’s permission. He followed her, unable to look away. The path beneath their feet grew wild, overgrown, the roots gnarled like the fingers of the dead. The air thickened, the night sounds fading until there was nothing but the rustling of her skirts and the distant crash of waves against unseen cliffs.
"Where are we going?" he asked, his voice barely more than a breath.
She turned to him then.
The hat slipped back just enough to reveal her face—not the soft, perfect features he had imagined, but something decayed, something grotesque. Skin stretched taut over hollowed bones, blackened lips peeling away from jagged teeth. Her eyes, empty pits, burned into him as the scent of damp earth turned to the stench of rot.
Jean stumbled back, the spell broken. Horror clawed at his throat. He tried to turn, to run, but the trees had twisted in on themselves, the path gone. The ground beneath him felt loose, crumbling. He was on the edge of something vast, something deep—
He heard her laugh, low and knowing, just as the ground gave way.
Days later, they found his body at the base of the cliffs, his bones shattered, his face frozen in terror.
The villagers whispered among themselves, crossing themselves when they spoke his name. They all knew the truth.
Jean had been taken by La Diablesse.
And she was still out there, waiting for the next fool to follow.
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